Saturday, 9 August 2014

At Dawn





Photo credits-Genebrooks.blogspot.com

What ended with a whimper 
 begins with a yawn
 At Dawn


 Toil sweat and faith
 Watches lines of fate, drawn and redrawn.
 At dawn.


 Night of dispair ends.
 Another glory gone.
 At dawn.

 A dream is dead
 A hope is born.
 At dawn.










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16 comments:

  1. Claudia10 August 2014 at 00:33

    i love how dawn carries new hope no matter what happened the day, the night before... so much newness in those first rays of light

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  2. Anonymous10 August 2014 at 00:39

    This poem is so relaxing, slightly dipped in melancholy. An acoustic melody should be added to this. :)

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  3. Natašek10 August 2014 at 01:35

    sometimes at dawn we see things so differently as the night before.

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  4. Sumana Roy10 August 2014 at 01:44

    always a ray of hope & freshness...

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  5. brudberg10 August 2014 at 01:51

    Dawn is that horizon were dreams meet reality...

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  6. alan170410 August 2014 at 02:18

    Hope and mercy every dawn

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  7. J Cosmo Newbery10 August 2014 at 02:56

    "What ended with a whimper begins with a yawn At Dawn..."
    Don't let Mrs N see that!

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  8. Arushi Ahuja10 August 2014 at 03:02

    Sunrises bring so many new things with them... a good sleep refreshes us... beautifully spoken!

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  9. Sancho10 August 2014 at 03:22

    I think we need to drag the dream out into the daylight and make it work for its living.

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  10. Old Egg10 August 2014 at 03:55

    There is nothing so enervating, stimulating even, as dawn. Another chance, another beginning, a clean slate.

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  11. Brian Miller10 August 2014 at 04:33

    that last bit is interesting...that a dream will end so that hope can arise in a new day....one of the conundrums of life....

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  12. ZQ10 August 2014 at 05:56

    Well... Good Morning!
    ZQ

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  13. Sherry Blue Sky10 August 2014 at 08:57

    I love the hopefulness of dawn.

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  14. Myrna R.10 August 2014 at 12:47

    Nice. The last lines are so full of hope.

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  15. Gen Giggles 10 August 2014 at 19:54

    A wonderful way to welcome the day. Or in my case get ready for the night. Remembering that tomorrow is a new dawn, a new hope.

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  16. humbird12 August 2014 at 08:21

    Dawn alwas give us new hope, new vision and clarity. x

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